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He ade great progress in our studies.

He embered as a great leader, a -hearted man.

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achievements.By the age of 14, he had taught himself 议论文

advanced mathematics.

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attitudes tooking.

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classmates.

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All these years he has been ust try to persuade people to give up Many times he has been praised for his smoking.

excellent puters He gets on very es.

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From the above, I come to the conclusion that smoking does great harm to our health. From no the bad habit and form a good one.

Millions of smokers die from illness caused by smoking tobacco.

My suggestions are as folloake full use of our

time to uch time on TV may have bad effects on our any ore and more students are getting near-sighted in schools,

because they have paid little attention to the care of their eyes. 写作的七项基本原则

一、长短句原则工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a ilar.

如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!

强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。主题句原则国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!

相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!

特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!To begin ust (主题句). ost important of all, moreover, finally 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)

10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)

建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!短语优先原则

写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:I cannot bear it.

可以用短语表达:I cannot put up looking fororous,

interesting, smart, gentle, -hearted, hospital之类的形象词。再比如:如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲 小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!是插入语。多变句式原则The man you met yesterday is a friend 加法(串联)of mine.

都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is 些,可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后的easy-going.句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影I enjoy music and he is fond of playing 响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键guitar.词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式: or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also 6)排比(排山倒海句).文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要其它的短语可以用:让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望

你引用一 besides, furthermore, likeoreover个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定转折(拐弯抹角) 式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说使文章有排山倒海之势!

说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方odern or

式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。traditional, sophisticated or simple, there 所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来is plenty in London for you.

点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。No.es that of失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)China.如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身怪! 三、文章主体段落的三大杀手锏体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真一、举实例思维短路,举实例!提出一个的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,宾语从句的变形。尽管举例子!举例:This is ore customers, aking ads, such as

sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to

advertise a certain food, advertisers ingly delicious food e him or her.更多句型:To take?as an example, One example is?, Another exampleis?, for example做比较方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:相似的比较:

in comparison, likeilarly, in the same manner相反的比较:

on the other hand, conversely, pared enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.I am fed up ore difficult language, in simpler ore simply.

雅思写作常用单词----常用的连接词 常用的连接词: 1)表层次:

first, firstly to begin ore

third, thirdly ore last last but not least

also and then next besides

and equally important too moreover besides in addition finally 2)表转折; in next year.in daughter?es,by contrast although though yet (3)First,let me tell you somethingmore I e time but despite the fact that about myself.more(7)Evening came does every atch on TV连词及与并置问题that together.for连词连接的前后两部分是否合乎逻辑;并列连词notuch television,but 所连接的前后两部分结构是否等同。这两点是解spite of a feuch键所在。regardless (6) I to meet me at 3)表因果; of my English teacher.oftenthe station and drove me to their therefore consequently because of for the (7)I e.drive reason moment my head touched the pilloakes us gro spirit.gives since as on that account in this iling but nodding at for as a result as a consequence 配要前后一致等。me.and 4)表让步: (1)It to meet me at (4)I remembered her still nevertheless concession granted the raile to their doednaturally home.of (5)It looks as if my parents treat me as in spite of all the same of course despite (2)I use

to play ping -pong a lot in my a visitor and a guest.or even so after all sparetime,but...used (6)The food e me ore moreover likeore others preferred another.one (7)As bed the mountain,e monkeys,visiting temples and told too in addition arguing and ...of stories.visited 6)表举例: (5)y English拿到题目后,手中拿铅笔,手脑眼嘴并用,point teacher in the croatter of fact frankly speaking in this (7)Like most of my schoolmates,I have 个名字?要议论文还是记叙文?对分几段写有case namely neither brothers nor sisters—in any other 无要求?等等。诸如此类的硬性要求信息,都最in other an only child.any(any需好用铅笔划下来,以免出错,也许你一开始会记语 为删去的词) 得,可随着时间的流逝,你会不会因紧张而遗忘8)表总结: 9、易混淆的词或词组这些信息呢?还是小心为妙。边看最好边张嘴默in summary in a pler terms 的部分。姑且认为不太可取,毕竟考场时间宝贵,即使我indeed in short in particular that is (1)...but no interesting in 有四十分钟时间写作文也不敢贸然这么做,更何in other ust keep in mind that el the team instead∧ourselves.of 易出错,二来边写边想思维不连贯,即使思维连4、赘述(3)Noany people 关键词,三打句式。 下划线的词为多余的词,即需删去的词)among my family.in1.结构就是你打算分几段写,每段都写什(1)Today

I visited the Smiths-my first (5)They did not e to do any e visit to an American family.timefamily;they e to...home的。 (2)In fact,they are planning to visit China (6)Do they really understand their2.关键词:结构拟定后,迅速在草稿纸上写

下自己这篇作文可能用到的一些关键词。包括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会忘记的词。主要是动词和名词。

譬如一省作文题:假设你的名字是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现招募志愿者。你希望成为志愿者。申请信的格式已经写好了,你直接写内容就可以。你的个人情况:年龄性别学历,个人条件。英语好,爱好体育,擅长交际,乐于助人。承诺提供最佳服务。关键词就是学历、爱好、擅长、乐于、承诺,重要评分标准,满分作文有个共性,就是有效地situation of my oore, I am doubt等。例: 使用了语句间的连接成分,为此,学会使用关联able to better understand the author’s ideas. ①The ans involves many 词,是提升书面表达质量的重要策略之一。In a based on it. 解决问题的方法涉及两方面,首先,??其有的同学在作文中使用过多简单句,成了简单句 【精彩点击】 次,??最后,?? 堆砌;有的写复杂句时,动辄用so, and,then,写作要求我们就选择看电影还是读原著谈谈看②The follo. On the one hand, . . . On the other 方式的目的,反而使句子

结构松散、呆板。为了范,语法正确的同时,较好地运用句子间的连接hand, . . . 避免这种现象,可以通过使用不同的关联词,不词,从而使文章结构严谨,层次分明,逻辑性强。 以下原因导致了这一问题, 一方面, ??另一仅能够丰富句型,而且还能够把思想表达得更清①第一段中,besides一词的使用,多角度说明方面,?? 和你对这篇作文初步构思时想到的一些词。先把这些词(指词的英文表达)写在纸上。有一些词的拼写,譬如学历,可能你本身就记得不是特别清楚,这时一定要在开始写作文前先把它写下来,以免一会因干扰而遗忘。

然后,别着急,这些词不一定就是你作文中要用的词啊。可能看到聪明这个关键词时,你最初写下的往往是clever,再仔细想想,你是不是又想到了smart,deligient好多词,挑个漂亮和合适的用吧。再比如转折,你写了but,这会再想想,是不是又有一堆表示转折的词在你脑里打转呢?挑一个吧。千万别用but.

3.句式:词写下来了,其实你构建这篇作文的建筑材料就到位了,下步就是要把它们盖成漂亮的作文。先用最普通的陈述句把它们在头脑中过一遍,然后看看都能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陈述句改成问句?能不能用上一个双重否定句?能不能用一个主语从句套定语从句的长句?能不能用一个插入语?等等。把你高中三年的英语积累展示出来。在草稿纸上同样标注。三.正式写。

这样的草稿打完后,就要快快写了。注意,英语作文的卷面简直太重要了,一定要把字写整齐,写大。没有把握的词和句子不用,宁可忍痛割爱也不冒犯错的风险。别忘了遵守你最初用铅笔划下的题目的规定。

四.检查。注意,最最重要的一步来了。尽管很小心,可是我们写英语作文还是会犯下很多错误。单词拼写的,大小写的,等等。这些错误会极大破坏我们在阅卷老师心目中的形象,一定要坚决誓死消灭。即使时间再紧,请务必留下1——2分钟检查作文的时间,消除隐性错误,避免自杀行为。

需要说明的是,英语的开头和结尾是最关键的,尤其是开头。基本上,不跑题,遵守题目要求,一个漂亮的开头,一个还过得去的结尾,2-3个高级词汇,1-2个漂亮的句子,加上整齐的字迹,作文的分就不会低了哦。所以,精心为你的作文想个漂亮的开头吧,切记哦:)

高考英语作文增分的“亮点”

文章的连贯性和紧凑感是高考书面表达的一个楚,意义更连贯。 人们选择看电影的理由; ③As a matter of fact, it is health rather ■ 金题解析 ②第二段中,mean or book, ③第三段中,

ore一词的使用,使作者④ore serious is that or book, e of us think that it is better to see the generally speaking, lately, currently等。(虽然如此), other than to read the book in the original. 例: ore and more experts.

点。因此,要分两段写出两种不同的观点,在最②In the recent feillions of fast 这一想法却受到越来越多的专家质疑。

后一段写出自己的观点。高考书面表达新评分标food restaurants have mushroomed all over ②But just as a coin has t 准在语言运用上对同学们提出了更高的要求,即China. inevitably has its disadvantages. 在考查短文语言表达准确性的基础上,进一步强近几年,中国涌现上百万快餐店。 凡事都有两方面,旅游不可避免地有其缺陷。 调用词的得体性、表达方式的多样性及语言的连③Currently, there is a plain their children are 贯性。因此,在写作时,我们一定要尽可能多使over increasing traffic accidents. behaving unreasonably e of us think that it is better to see the of the utmost importance in keeping fit. ④In spite of these changes, the liberation film than to read the book in the original. 首先,每日锻炼对保持健康至关重要。 of en has not been completed realized. The reason is that it takes less

time to ⑤Generally speaking, the more you 尽管有些变化,妇女解放仍未完全实现。 understand the ore skillfully you can e examinations fail film is usually more interesting, and it is in English. to measure hoe others have just the opposite opinion. (2)用于“承”的关联词语通常用在段落中的相反,有些考试却难以真正衡量学生学识。 They think that they can get more detailed 第一个扩展句中: second, similarly, in (4)用于“合”的关联词语通常用在段落的结information from the original. Meanore, 论句或文章的结论段中:in a ore moreover, ore, ple, for instance, certainly, surely, speaking,to sum up, finally, in conclusion, Personally, I agree mary, therefore, as a result, Actually I have more reasons for it. I think particularly, in particular, indeed, still, above all, thus,after all, eventually, hence, I can stay at home, reading quietly in a third, truly, in fact, at the same time, no in sum(总之), on the up等。例:

①Last but no least, the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency.

最后,但并非最不重要,教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因。

②For these reasons, e and more energy to communicate in ental pollution is the major problem to be solved to make our ay safely draodern society.

通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论:自行车的优点远大于缺点,并且在现代社会它仍将发挥重要作用。

高考英语作文精彩短语150条

1 欣赏大自然的风景 to appreciate the scenery of nature

2 培养公德心 to cultivate the public mindedness

3 维护健康 to maintain health

4 保护环境 to protect the environment5 开拓视野 to broaden the horizon6 开拓心胸 to broaden the mind7 调剂生活 to make life pleasant8 松散身心 to relax oneself

9 启迪心灵 to enlighten the mind10 灌输知识 to impart knoeone

11 追求理想 to seek after the ideal12 实现抱负 to realize one’s ambition13 守信用 to keep one’s promise

14 跟上时代 to keep up es15 欣赏古典文学 to appreciate the classical literature

16 学习吉他 to learn guitar17 陶冶品德 to cultivate the character

18 贡献国家 to contribute oneself to the country

19 锻炼身体 to strengthen, exercise the body

20 缺乏休闲活动 to lack recreations21 作笔记 to take notes

22 使用参考书 to use reference books23 关心社会 to be concerned about the society

24 服从校规 to folloe the difficulty

27 面临困难 to be confronted 29 走快捷方式 to cut the corner30 量脉搏 to feel the pulse

31 开药方 to prescribe the medicine32 坚守原则 to stick to the principle33 注意卫生 to emphasize the importance of hygiene

34 乱丢垃圾 to litter; to scatter garbage

35 美化环境 to beautify the environment

36 种植树木 to groote the qualities of life

39 造成损害 to do damage to40 对...有益 to benefit; to be beneficial to41 对...有害 to be harmful to; to do harm to

42 任意停车 to park the car at random43 制造噪音 to make noises

44 占用人行道 to occupy the sideoke, exhaust, fume

47 造成不便 to cause inconvenience48 造成混乱 to bring

about the disorder

49 闯红灯 to run through the red light50 利用天桥 to make use of the overpass

51 查字典 to consult the dictionary52 屏息 to hold one’s breath53 流泪 to shed tears

54 符合需要 to meet the demand55 生根 to take root

56 产生结果 to bear fruit57 打破沉默 to break the ice58 气馁 to lose heart; to get discouraged

59 振作 to pull oneself together; to take heart

60 采取步骤 to take steps; to take measures

61 缓和悲伤 to ease ( alleviate ) the sorroake allople67 接受教育 to receive education68 提升生活的水平 to raise the standard of living

69 告辞 to take one’s leave70 有很深的了解 to have a deep

understanding of

71 跟随流行 to follooney73 存钱 to deposit money

74 良心不安 the conscience stirs75 自立 to be independent; to stand on one’s omand of English

77 有广泛的知识 to have a portant role in

80 聊天 to have a chat ake a choice

83 有很大的影响 to have a great influence on84 予人...很深的印象 to make a deep impression on

85 愚弄 to make a fool of86 找借口 to make an excuse

87 给人搭便车 to give one a lift88 打电话 to give someone a ring89 冒险 to take chances

90 怀恨 to bear grudge against someone

91 牢记在心 to bear .....in mind92 板着脸 to pull a long

face93 对...充耳不闻 to turn a deaf ear to

94 被开除 to be dismissed from school95 生气 to be angry e the responsibility

97 符合需要 to serve the purpose98 变胖 to gain ake sense100 记日记 to keep a diary

101 尽己所能 to do e in tennis103 郊游 to go on an outing104 消磨时间 to kill time

105 增加生活的情趣 to increase the pleasures of life

106 精神抖擞 to be ( feel ) refreshed107 解除紧张和焦虑 to relieve the tension and anxiety

108 宣泄久积的情绪 to release the pent-up feelings

109 游手好闲 to fool around110 准备考试 to prepare for the examination

111 参加课外活动 to take part in the club activities

112 无精打采的 to be listless113 精力充沛的 to be vigorous, energetic

114 防台 to guard against the typhoon115 逃避现实 to escape the reality116 达到目标 to achieve the aim

117 五育并重 to lay equal emphasis on the Five Disciplines

118 感到无聊 to feel ( be ) bored119 感到剌激 to be excited

120 感到满意 to be pleased, satisfied121 感到失望 to be disappointed122 感到振奋 to be encouraged, inspired

123 感到气馁 to be discouraged, frustrated

124 感到疲倦的 to be exhausted125 感到烦恼 to be ake progress

130 失去连络 to lose track of

131 保持连络 to keep in touch ake it a rule to; to cultivate the habit

134 统一中国 to reunify China

135 不辞辛劳 to take the pains to

136 遇到交通阻塞 to be caught in a traffic jam137 给...教训 to teach someone a lesson

138 改过自新 to turn over a neake the reservation144 使...澈夜未眠 to cost someone a sleepless night

145 充满喜悦 to be filled ake a great difference

149 犯法 to violate the law

150 不遗余力 to spare no efforts to

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